*clap clap clap* Again a marvelous work from you and Lai. It was just amazing and very well though out. The transitions of the colors of you going into the darkness and following the words of Lai was very intense and clever. But I do have to say I was a tiiiny bit confused on the text part either with the color or font. May I suggest (if I so may) same font, but different colors between you and Lai or any other characters that may appear later on in the story. The intro of the beings was very beautifully thought out. Of the cliff hang leaves everyone dying for more as well as wanting to go through the experience you were going through with the guidance of Lai. The colors were unique and interesting, and the story line is very clean. Continue with the great work Madam Kurama-fox!!!
"logic does nothing more than tell you something you already know." - Robert Heinlein
that quote logged in my mind as i started tearing up with lai's guidance and your own self revelations. as always, you have awed me with your ability to delve into yourself; and earth the precious gems that lay buried beneath. I'm a bit too chocked up at all of this to give a fair review, but you've outdone yourself yet again my dear.