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Canadian autumn

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I finished it.. *stares at the screen* Gosh I really did.. O 7 O

I believe I can be proud of me and my first ever serious wolf drawing! Besides I think it was a good choice to combine some naturalistic realism with one of my OC's *smiles*

BUT DAT FUR WAS A REAL CHALLENGE! D:




Raviem (c) me

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I never believe any piece of art deserves 5 stars in each category, because there's always something that needs to be improved, so don't be discouraged by the stars!

Okay, so this overall is a great piece in general, the colors are appealing to the eye, the grayish white wolf against the colorful autumn forest, lovely. The texture of the dirt and mix of leaves on the ground, the trees behind.

Now, mostly what I think could be better is indeed not really the fur of the world entirely but as well as how much smoothness you're putting in the image. The tree bark looks too smooth. Like if you touch it, your hand simply slides over like a smooth rock. The colors are great, but I think it needs a bit more texture. The grass doesn't look sharp enough, either. The wolf is actually pretty good, though I think more texture could be added with the coat on lighter parts, but just a little.

Over all, this is something to be proud of.