I finished it.. *stares at the screen* Gosh I really did.. O 7 O
I believe I can be proud of me and my first ever serious wolf drawing! Besides I think it was a good choice to combine some naturalistic realism with one of my OC's *smiles*
I never believe any piece of art deserves 5 stars in each category, because there's always something that needs to be improved, so don't be discouraged by the stars!
Okay, so this overall is a great piece in general, the colors are appealing to the eye, the grayish white wolf against the colorful autumn forest, lovely. The texture of the dirt and mix of leaves on the ground, the trees behind.
Now, mostly what I think could be better is indeed not really the fur of the world entirely but as well as how much smoothness you're putting in the image. The tree bark looks too smooth. Like if you touch it, your hand simply slides over like a smooth rock. The colors are great, but I think it needs a bit more texture. The grass doesn't look sharp enough, either. The wolf is actually pretty good, though I think more texture could be added with the coat on lighter parts, but just a little.
I critique is to help you get better at art.That just what I'm here for. The bautiful wolf.My favorite animal.Well I'll get to the point on this critique. The paws are very well drawn.And I don't think I could do anything to help you get better at them. The face is just buatiful.The bright blue eyes.Very very pretty. The trees in the background are pretty too. Exspecily the red ones. Let's get to the stars!I bet you'd like that! Vision:five stars.I can see everything perfectly. Originality: four and a half stars.There are a lot of white wolves out there and I don't know if you just wanted to draw one or if it's an OC. Technique: five stars. Impact: five stars.
as I told u before, absolutly awesome, very beatyfull wolf^^. I like the background as well. I'm just amazed about that pictur. Sorry it took me some to fav it, had to search my login^^
Thank you, sweet! <3 Yeah I've figured out you haven't been online too much lately ^^ I've hd my own phases as well, but usually come back to dA every two weeks if life's too stressing ;') *huggles*
I hope your flue went away, and you healthy again. I watched Stein's Gate, awesome seriers. A bit borring in the beginning but after they started that timetraveling messages it becomes soon into something really intersting and fascinating^^. I still dont know if I should buy Game of Thrones in books or ebooks. Dont have much place for storing them anymore. That place is cramped...
Okay, so this overall is a great piece in general, the colors are appealing to the eye, the grayish white wolf against the colorful autumn forest, lovely. The texture of the dirt and mix of leaves on the ground, the trees behind.
Now, mostly what I think could be better is indeed not really the fur of the world entirely but as well as how much smoothness you're putting in the image. The tree bark looks too smooth. Like if you touch it, your hand simply slides over like a smooth rock. The colors are great, but I think it needs a bit more texture. The grass doesn't look sharp enough, either. The wolf is actually pretty good, though I think more texture could be added with the coat on lighter parts, but just a little.
Over all, this is something to be proud of.
The bautiful wolf.My favorite animal.Well I'll get to the point on this critique.
The paws are very well drawn.And I don't think I could do anything to help you get better at them.
The face is just buatiful.The bright blue eyes.Very very pretty.
The trees in the background are pretty too. Exspecily the red ones.
Let's get to the stars!I bet you'd like that!
Vision:five stars.I can see everything perfectly.
Originality: four and a half stars.There are a lot of white wolves out there and I don't know if you just wanted to draw one or if it's an OC.
Technique: five stars.
Impact: five stars.
Good job!
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